The entire poem is lovely, but the last two lines hit me something powerful where my feelings lie. Loss & 'ravages' turn into homecoming, as if every part that goes away is going home to somewhere: lost, but also found.
I am well satisfied, and glad others will have a chance to delight in this piece too.
okay to use gendered 'her' instead of neutral 'hir', by and by
I am well satisfied, and glad others will have a chance to delight in this piece too.