jjhunter: Serene person of color with shaved head against abstract background half blue half brown (scientific sage)
jjhunter ([personal profile] jjhunter) wrote in [personal profile] untonuggan 2012-08-23 01:59 pm (UTC)

okay to use gendered 'her' instead of neutral 'hir', by and by

The entire poem is lovely, but the last two lines hit me something powerful where my feelings lie. Loss & 'ravages' turn into homecoming, as if every part that goes away is going home to somewhere: lost, but also found.

I am well satisfied, and glad others will have a chance to delight in this piece too.

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