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untonuggan) wrote2011-03-21 10:44 am
untonuggan) wrote2011-03-21 10:44 am
Poem - "Archeopteryx"
I wrote this to experiment with rhyming and a set number of syllables, and I think it came out rather well. Please comment if you have any feedback!
Archeopteryx
byuntonuggan
Binoculars in hand, I watch
as backyard birds defend their patch:
fierce blue jays imitating hawks,
starlings fighting with warlike squawks.
Each year chickadees make their nest;
bubbling house wrens give no rest,
invade the bird box set to kill
pierce chick's eggs, their home to fill.
A red-winged hawk haunts the feeder
stalking an unwary eater;
brings the corpse home to feed its brood;
in the end, everyone is food.
Who can blame their survival war?
they're not so far from dinosaur;
change scale to feather, tooth to beak;
T. rex's bloodline isn't weak.
Archeopteryx
by
untonuggan Binoculars in hand, I watch
as backyard birds defend their patch:
fierce blue jays imitating hawks,
starlings fighting with warlike squawks.
Each year chickadees make their nest;
bubbling house wrens give no rest,
invade the bird box set to kill
pierce chick's eggs, their home to fill.
A red-winged hawk haunts the feeder
stalking an unwary eater;
brings the corpse home to feed its brood;
in the end, everyone is food.
Who can blame their survival war?
they're not so far from dinosaur;
change scale to feather, tooth to beak;
T. rex's bloodline isn't weak.