untonuggan: Lily and Chance squished in a cat pile-up on top of a cat tree (buff tabby, black cat with red collar) (Default)
I had a moment of enlightenment/nirvana that was quite nice yesterday amidst all the suffering/dukka I've been going through lately. I wrote about it in [personal profile] jjhunter 's most recent How Are You? (in haiku) post, but felt it deserved its own space as well.

The poetic version:

arose from child's pose
quest complete: a pair of bluebirds
found a home in mine
bonus prize: cedar waxwings
bathing, my eyes shedding years


The prose version:
Cut in case you just want the poetry without any spoiler explanations )

ETA: And yes, I did cheat and make it a tanka. :P

untonuggan: Lily and Chance squished in a cat pile-up on top of a cat tree (buff tabby, black cat with red collar) (Default)
I wrote this to experiment with rhyming and a set number of syllables, and I think it came out rather well. Please comment if you have any feedback!

Archeopteryx
by [personal profile] untonuggan 

Binoculars in hand, I watch
as backyard birds defend their patch:
fierce blue jays imitating hawks,
starlings fighting with warlike squawks.

Each year chickadees make their nest;
bubbling house wrens give no rest,
invade the bird box set to kill
pierce chick's eggs, their home to fill.

A red-winged hawk haunts the feeder
stalking an unwary eater;
brings the corpse home to feed its brood;
in the end, everyone is food.

Who can blame their survival war?
they're not so far from dinosaur;
change scale to feather, tooth to beak;
T. rex's bloodline isn't weak.

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