Yoga/Birdwatching Nirvana Moment
Jan. 12th, 2013 10:04 amI had a moment of enlightenment/nirvana that was quite nice yesterday amidst all the suffering/dukka I've been going through lately. I wrote about it in
jjhunter 's most recent How Are You? (in haiku) post, but felt it deserved its own space as well.
The poetic version:
arose from child's pose
quest complete: a pair of bluebirds
found a home in mine
bonus prize: cedar waxwings
bathing, my eyes shedding years
The prose version:
( Cut in case you just want the poetry without any spoiler explanations )
ETA: And yes, I did cheat and make it a tanka. :P
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The poetic version:
arose from child's pose
quest complete: a pair of bluebirds
found a home in mine
bonus prize: cedar waxwings
bathing, my eyes shedding years
The prose version:
( Cut in case you just want the poetry without any spoiler explanations )
ETA: And yes, I did cheat and make it a tanka. :P